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Red clouds my vision as I stare into another reality
Forgetting everything about the world that I belong to
A red so deep, It makes me feel as though I'm drowning
Drowning in a thick pool of burning lust
Not a lust for blood, nor a lust for violence
But a lust for love consumes my pitch-black soul
Glowing through my aura, so noticeably red
Crimson clouds floating by, taunting me
Laughing at my silence, laughing at my imprisonment
Through these glass walls I cannot scream
A cage without bounds, yet these chains are wrapped so tight around me
Woven by the Gods themselves
So they can play their sick little games with my mind
The silence is deafening, this red world so desolate
The only fire burning is inside of me
But the embers glow only softly
And they are not enough to warm this cold soul of mine
©2005-2009 ~x-innocence-x
:iconx-innocence-x:

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haha...I'm not even going to explain why I wrote this, or what caused me to cause it will just creep you guys out and stuff

But I did write this while I was at work >>; how cool is that

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:iconcreslaton:
aww i love this! :aww: a really good choice of words, it sounds really good :)

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... i really deserve my coffee right now:coffeecup:...
:icondrakondarkhaven:
Two words: I Love.

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"The darkness of my mind, coupled with the hatred in my heart, will devour the world and cast it into the void that is my soul"
:iconx-innocence-x:
aw thanks dear! Yeah I dunno...I'm hoping I can write more poetry more often, haha

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Simba...

No, I'm Jesus, LOL

:rose: Poet's Rapture :rose:
:iconx-innocence-x:
:aww: Thanks!

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Simba...

No, I'm Jesus, LOL

:rose: Poet's Rapture :rose:
:icondrakondarkhaven:
Your thanks aren't neccesary when in fact I should be thanking you for writing such a wonderful piece

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"The darkness of my mind, coupled with the hatred in my heart, will devour the world and cast it into the void that is my soul"
:icondeath-moose:
words can't explain how wonderful this is.

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:floating: The eyes, they see! *hides*
:iconx-innocence-x:
awww :blush: You're too sweet :hug:

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Simba...

No, I'm Jesus, LOL

:rose: Poet's Rapture :rose:
:iconx-innocence-x:
:aww: thank you, it's sweet of you to say that =)
And thanks for the fav ^^ :hug:

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Simba...

No, I'm Jesus, LOL

:rose: Poet's Rapture :rose:
:icondrakondarkhaven:
Why yes, and Im sugar free as well

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"The darkness of my mind, coupled with the hatred in my heart, will devour the world and cast it into the void that is my soul"

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